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Uh, I was putting in chicken fencing around my blueberries yesterday. I have a minimum swing with my wrist that my father (the carpenter) says is bad for you. I tried his method, and smash the shit out of my hand half the time. I tried it his way just as they were leaving, you know, because father knows best. Wrong. Fucking wrong! I am incredibly inept. I have a time honed method of doing things and I do it that way for a reason.

Smashed hand is smashed. Nothing broken, but a five pound sledge to the top of your hand makes things like typing difficult at best.

I am sorry, but there is not going to be a part tonight. Try back again tomorrow or tuesday.

Now, I must let this neproxim sodium kick in for my hand, my ego has no healing balm.
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At the moment, I am working on the next 2 chapters of Part 4. I've been thinking of the outline like I did with the first part. It would certainly help by removing any unknown parts, guiding me in the direction I want to go in case I forget. I forget often. I find myself talking like Floki from Vikings and wondering what I am up to.

They are looking at you, precious.

Part of this, I have been trying to come up with a better summary for the series, something that I can put on the master post. I know I can do better than the crappy one I have. It doesn't even begin to cover the complexity of the first story, let alone the entire series.

Here's my second draft, it's far from complete, though:

50 years after first contact, the world has changed to accomodate the new life/revelation. Charlie Bennett grew up in a society obsessed with their first alien visitor. Fawning over this man-turned-superhero became sheer, mindless adoration. Watching the rise of this cultish following has left him bereft and apart from his family. What began as a simple dislike has grown into outright hatred of the man and everything associated with him.

It's into this world that Charlie finds himself barely surviving. Forced to live the life he never wanted, he's making the best of the situation. But his isn't the only life left unhappy. Protests and acts of civil disobedience are on the rise. Caught up in the growing tide of rebellion, Charlie finds his life dashed upon the rocks, left in ruins.

Swept along, he finds an unfamiliar ally, a hand that reached out and caught him. With this stranger, Charlie may come to realize he's not so alone.
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I'm so sick of this, and I'm certain you are too. I can't get anything written with too much to do, and when I do get the chance to sit, I can't focus on my work.

Any suggestions?
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Baby, it's gonna be late. I was up all night trolling conservatives on twitter with bad jokes to take the piss out of them and their little bullshit victory in Nevada. Making fun of the enemy, that's true social justice. I even got in a dig at that twit Suey Park.

It meant I didn't get around to writing on the next chapter like I wanted to, and I'm working on it now. It will be up by tomorrow morning.
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In the next couple days, I am going to be making several posts.

One of the largest groups of postings will be Master posts for all current projects, that includes works only in the theoretical stage. I very much need to do this for my own mental well being. It helps make these stories more real to have something tangible. The summary part allows me to remember what I am writing about. This will also allow me to keep track of what I'm doing/have done. In having this much done, I will feel accomplished enough to get back to work.

Another group of posts I will be making is a plot overview/discussion post for some of my stories. I would greatly appreciate you, my dear readers, to act as sounding boards for my work. If you could point out holes in the plot, tell me if it works overall, if the thing is too absurd, that would make my world a better place.

The last group of posts might never emerge. I'm thinking of getting back to my anecdote posts. Sharing what I've learned, what I find.

Oh, and hopefully, if I find time, I'll try putting out a new chapter of Average Joe Sunday. No promises. Actually, since you probably just googled 'hitman', I think I might move that to the top of my to-do-list.
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Your author is tired and feeling brain drained. After weeks of deliberating, I have decided on this year's work list.

I will finish the following:

All 5 novels of the Average Joe series.
The Post-Apocalyptic novella starring Ned(jabi) that I posted the teaser for earlier.
An army invasion/occupation with aliens thrown in for fun novella.
The Blue-eyed Bents Knotting novella I posted the teaser for.
Shane's novella, aka the other superhero story.
An unnamed werewolf short story.

I will start the following:

Terradygm, a series about artificially created humans in a post-space colonization earth where humans are on the decline.
A knotting novel about a man who meets his alpha match.
The winged southern gothic novel.

Everything else I will work out as I get the time or the mood strikes me. There are no definite dates. This is just what I am setting for my yearly goals. Shit I should have had set by Jan. 1st. Oh well, better late than never. We'll see how well this list goes. I am so tired of not getting anything done.
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So, I waited for a response to my postings. And I waited. And waited.

No one cares, it's just a stupid waste of time trying to use Tumblr to promote my works. Archive of our own is for fanfiction, badly written fanfiction at that. At least it's easy to use and makes finding my kinks so much easier. I like that.

If I'm going to sell my work, I'm going to have to do it the old fashioned way. Street corner under the dim light, here I come.

I deleted my work from AO3 and fictionpress. For now, I'm going to leave the stories I have on tumblr alone. I might even leave the few I have unlocked here that way. I hate doing this. With my fanfic, I can't, unuh. No way. That stays on the net so long as the places it is posted stay online. But my original work... That's mine. It's my hardwork and efforts. Even if it kills me to do it.

How else can I violate my own principles in little ways while I'm depressed? I think I'll go leave anti-gay slurs on the WBC website about their dying patriarch. That should make me about as low as I can get.

Putin. If you say it right, means whore in French. Remember that, people. Heehee. Whore. Heehee.
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I deleted my previous projects post. It was outdated and no longer served its purpose. My current projects included more than just those listed. The new projects post will be listed according to current planned writing sequence.

1). Chapters 3-4 of Average Joe sequel. These might be the last new chapters for a time as I am unable to meet my sunday dates. I am swamped with massive guilt and it is making writing impossible.

2). Dreams Taken Root (current title): ABO novella about an average office worker hiding a big secret in a society where registering your gender is mandatory by law. His newest job brings him in contact with his first, real-live Alpha and things begin to change.

3). Begin Editing An Average Joe. Chapters 5-6-7 of sequel. Each 3 chapters will be a story arc, expect 13 chapters in part 4.

4). First Novella In Terradigm Sequence. Post-technological apocalypse, Earth relies heavily upon her colonies and the lab-created human successors, Homo Corvenus. Young man discovers the price for which his parents earned their upper-class status and what happens when he cannot fulfill that price.

5). A Slow, Southern Man: Young man from New York loses his family apartment to gentrification and goes to visit his penpal. Finds a world of mythological creatures and southern gothic horror/romance.

6). An Abduction By The Sea: A book keeper on his wedding day is fitted for armor instead, as the village's old enemies are marching for their town. After trouncing them, he returns home to find the village being sacked by sea folk and is taken as hostage. He escapes during a stop for water, makes it home, but finds little of what he knew remains. Only, he's not alone.

7). Cresting The Hollow: The goal is to finish the story.

That is the list as it stands so far. I might change my mind in the future, thus, this is not a sticky post. In the meantime, I will also continue my teasers and writing exercises.

Any questions? Any requests?
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Here is another teaser. This was originally a prologue to my first novel/series as an original fiction writer. If this is well received, I will rewrite the story and present it for free online. It is a Detective Noir style about a man whose girlfriend is murdered by a serial killer and he is haunted by one of the victims in his dreams.

The Seventh Wonder
Teaser


Summary: In the world of just scraping by, there are still mysteries that make life a beautiful journey. All his life, Jack has been haunted by memories and dreams not his own. They've colored the shadows of his mind and driven him to avoid situations where he might encounter something familiar he's never experienced before.

His regular job as the legman for a private detective made Jack the source of information for many cases. It's taught him how to gather knowledge from even the most obscure places and given him a list of contacts even the police envy. This also brought him across the path of someone with an interest in staying hidden.

With survival at stake, is the cost of breathing too high?

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While was debating whether to start the next part of An Average Joe or begin editing the first novel yesterday, I did a writing exercise and actually produced a teaser for one of my other works. I got sidetracked by house work and cooking, so the next chapter will come out later this week, and I have the first major edit to An Average Joe part 1 plotted out, I just have to write it. Needless to say, it sets up the rest of the story and it's not that big a scene. A small addition and so much shit makes sense. I feel like a chump that it's taken me a year to realize it. Anyways, that's not why we're here.

The Silence of Surrender
by Heinrich Gothrykke


Summary: In the isolated town of Fireoaks, the populace is divided along class lines. Time was, everyone longed to belong to The Community. Reject the old ways and embrace modern living, it seemed the easiest thing. Parents teach children, the cycle continues, society advances.Only a few, the Bent, turned away from the inevitable evolution.

No one knew where they came from, rumor had it as either aliens or some atomic mutation. They embraced the wild side of living, lawless animals. Their slovenly appearance and manners mark them as little better than beasts. Many a respectable girl was lost to their lusts, never to be heard from again.

Everyday for Roan is a reminder of the fading world he doesn’t belong to as his circle of ‘friends’ dwindles through acquiescence to their parents or the pull of Bent desires. All he wants is to make it through unnoticed by either.

Category/Warnings: Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Young Adult, Knotting, High School, Creepy Vibe.

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I have been considering writing in the first person for a while. It's a challenge, but not that difficult if you focus on the writing itself. The thing to remember when using this POV is not to sounded like English is your seventh language or a narcissist. Oh, and pick a tense, past or present, don't juggle the two. An easy trick to getting this done right is to think like you are the narrator to your own life.

Observe:

Not everything in the world revolved around the seventh house. Certainly, it was the nicest on the block from the outside. The largest in the neighborhood, the designer had intended to make a statement about the owner. My thoughts about the owner were different than those intended, no doubt.

Every time I passed it on the street, the urge to throw rocks at the massive bay windows was almost too much to resist. It was a bit bitter, yes, but things were always like that when the state of one's affairs could be measured in pennies alone. No one could truly fault me for these feelings.

And even if they did, who gives a damn?


See, it's all in remembering that there are more words in the English language than just 'I'.

I post this because I am almost asking your permission to write my next short story in first person. Thing is, I am going to do it, but I would like the blessing of my readers to try it without an automatic refusal to read the results. Getting burned by awful 'arthurrs' has made first person POV almost a kiss of death. Just like women as the lead characters in genre novels, or genre novels written by women.

If you want to know what it is about even after the POV notice, it's going to be an angsty ABO romance in a society where people with the 'abnormal genders' being considered little better than animals and treated as such. Registering your gender upon reaching maturity is mandatory. People feel this is a violation of their rights, but there's a damn good reason, and it's not about controlling the pest population, either. The main character has been hiding his latent status his entire life, but has never met a presented alpha. Like most of my stories, it will explore the changes in society and rules of this new world as part of the plot. This is not a true summary, just a general idea of what it will contain.

What say you?
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At the moment I am clear headed and willing to write. This seems as good a time as any to come up with a writing group. The exact details of where and who with are still up in the air.

What is known:

1). I am thinking of a place that will allow for locked from the public conversations that has a chat function as well. A separate chat room might also be a thing to look into. It depends upon the hive mind.

2). What this group will do. Simple. Writers provide support to other writers. Discussion of projects, complaints about the system, moral support, offers to read over works, brainstorming sessions, feedback. The essential functions for your average writer.

3). Membership is limited only to writers.

4). What is discussed in writing group stays in writing group for proprietary reasons. Copyright notice all your project discussion posts will be the motto. This will be started off right, we want everyone to know that their works will be protected.

5). No publishing credentials needed for membership. Having only the intent to publish something is required.

6). Participation is mandatory. Even if it's only to pop in and say 'well, the idea you presented needs a little tinkering, here's why blah blah explanation blah, now I'm off to rescue starving orphan hedgehogs in Liverpool, ta', you have to share something.

7). Personal information is not-required/nor-discouraged. I like to share a little with my readers, an explanation most of the time for why something did(n't) happen. You won't be kicked out for posting "OT: I've got to tell you about this massive bitch that ruined my week/why I won't be writing tonight!"

8). Don't be that bitch to other writers. Use tact. Don't ask personal questions you wouldn't be willing to answer. Don't hound others where a gentle reminder will do. No flames.

9). Leave politics out of it/to your personal journals.

10). Be prepared to debate. A lot of writing is based on philosophy. Not sitting around thinking up grand thoughts that are useless in everyday life as idiots would have you believe, but the true idea of understanding things. As writers, we seek to understand people, ourselves, the world around us. It's not something we can help, it's a natural instinct, in fact, it can become a personality disorder. *twitches* If a debate becomes heated, we can and will talk it out.

Which brings us to number 11). Be mindful of how you say something and learn when not to speak is the best course of action. If you don't like something someone writes, don't approve of their style/genre/kink/pairing/hair color, make sure it's not because of your 'moral beliefs' before you say something. If is your personal 'morals' that motivate your feelings towards something, bring it up in a constructive way that invites discussion about how it will effect the reader. Do not try to convert the writer to your way of thinking! Remember, you're not always right, and your judgement does not set precedent.

12). NO PERSONAL ATTACKS! You don't like something someone said, the way they said it, make it a general debate. Don't lay into them with the burning fury of a thousand quasars to ensure that no mere mortal shall ever doubt thy divine presence again and shall rue the day they dared to oppose thee!

Divinity: Doctors think they are gods because they bring people back from the dead. Writers know they are gods because they create entire universes in their dreams. Cats find both simply amusing.
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I am sorry, but your author is sick. A sick, sick person.

Been feeling sick for the past 2 days and I am hopped up on cold mecidine. Haven't even stared this month's project. This sucks and I am typing this half blind.

See you next week.
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My next teaser is already in the writing phase. You can expect it sometime soon as I get the kinks worked out. I am extremely nervous. This is my first major female character in a year.

Of course, things aren't as simple as 'Girl in a story. The end.' This is me, we're talking about here.

This is a plot I've been kicking around since last summer. I wanted it to be my Halloween fic, but never got the chance to write it. After it was pointed out that several plot points were unreal, I had to skip on it. Now seems the perfect time to try a female protagonist.

It's about a woman who comes back from a camping trip to clear her head to find that her town is entirely empty. It's not one of those post-apocalyptic plots, this is a small town where everyone just disappeared in a week's time. She's having strange dreams, hearing voices, seeing movement out of the corner of her eye. Is this paranoia? Are her fears getting to her? Was it a toxic gas? Was there some form of evacuation?

You'll have to read to find out.
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These Forgotten Wanderers

by Heinrich Gothrykke




Summary: Whispered campfire stories tell of the day the stars fell upon the Earth and consumed the great cities of mankind. Three years after, only ruins and nomads remain. There is no refuge to remain hidden. Any such place is a lie. The only way to survive is to keep moving, but only in small groups. Anything larger than a few families, and you risk attracting Them...


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As part of my attempt to draw in readers, I am writing a series of shorts based upon my longer works. Some will be mini-versions of the story, others will be scenes from the story.

Tonight, I finished the first one. Based in a post-apocalyptic world where aliens have pretty much decimated the human population in their war, people survive by wandering. They gather in camps from time to time, but never for very long or in large numbers. Concentrations of people tend to draw the attention of the combating forces and human casualties are the side-effect. Ned is trying to survive, but there’s more than just the known factors against him. Meeting a stranger may reveal the reason behind everything and a possible way to survive it all.

This shot story will come out soon, along with several others. I plan on posting one a day for two weeks when I have enough written.
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All right, now that I have finished the rough draft of the novel, the next important step begins, Editing!

While I will be reading over the entirety of the story, I am the writer. I have special insight and understanding of the plot/characters. If there is something missing or doesn't make sense, I might not notice it.

I have my wonderful first reader, Fedaykin_here to thank for reading over this story as I posted it. She has kept me grounded and picked at threads that I missed. However, I was able to explain what was going on as she read.

What I need are fresh eyes. That is why I am offering 2 people the chance to read the completed versions of this story.

Here are the rules: You post a request here with a valid email address. I will send you an email with the completed story file. You make notes of things that don't make sense or are left unexplained by the end of the story. You then send those notes to me. I will include you in the acknowledgments of the book. Do not share the story file, do not post it online in part or in whole; the file will never be DRM protected, so I will rely upon your honor in this matter. Please, feel free to tell everyone about the story. If you want, I would be overjoyed if you left a review when it came out. Only two people will be accepted as continuity readers. First come, first served.

There it is, laid out in simple terms. Now, do you want to read my unedited masterpiece*?

*story is not guaranteed to be a masterpiece.
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As a writer, I can't stress enough how important it is to have someone you can confide in about your writing. They provide you with a sense of accomplishment and a shoulder to cry on when things aren't going well.

"Good," in a mellow tone is not supportive. It's a dismissal.

I hope you have someone who find someone who doesn't treat your writing like it's just one more thing to put up with. Creativity is fragile enough, my dears.
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I am almost done with chapter 9, and will begin working on chapter 10 of An Average Joe...In Love. When they are done, I will post them together. I am hoping for late tonight, early tomorrow. We'll see if I'm just hoping for the stars again.
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I'm unable to focus on writing. There is an end to the third part, though.
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